MERMAID ŞAHİKA
Dear readers today I will mention Şahika Ercüman. She is a free-diving record holder.Şahika Ercüman born in Çanakkale in 1985 ;therefore, she met with water at an early age. When she was twelf years old she join underwater team and then she took the first step to her career. Actually, she had an allergic asthma but whenever she dived she has never suffered.Water is he life. She graduated from Başkent University as a dietician.She has been interested in various underwater sports for fifteen years.She got the degree in Freediving World Championships in Spain and she broke the record for Turkey in 2006. In 2008 she has been third in Europe with Turkey Underwater Hockey National Team.She won the Turkey championship in free-diving branch in 2010.Şahika covered a distance of 110 meters with single breath under the ice. Şahika has broken the Horizontal Diving World Record in both women and men in Austria in 2011. Previous records for women and men were 70 and 108 meters. She has reached 70 meters in the branch of vertical diving in 10th November 2011 and on the same day she dived 60 meters without palette in this way she has broken two world records again.In this summer she won two world records again. She is very intelligent, successful and helpful woman and sportwoman. She manages lots of social responsibility project. In addition to the athletes personality, she is motivation and success speaker,TV shows server,advertising film and movie player,freediving ınstructor. I think she deserves being more recognized In addition to world record she has won more than hundred medals, several special awards, trophies, many of Turkey Record thanks to her diving passion.Moreover, she tries to actualize her trial runs and records in special waters. I think she will win more awards and world records in next years.
dear seda,
YanıtlaSili really enjoyed when reading your reflection. i think you have exressed your ideas by giving supporting ideas, so i have a new perspective about Mermaid Şahika.i think you are right because she deserves what you have said.she is really a successful sportwoman . your organisation is good. i did not get confused when reading. maybe you could have used past tense when you were writing '' she has reached 70 meters in the branch of vertical diving in 10th November 2011'' because you are talking about specific time in the past.also, you should use full stop after recognized. i am sure you have forgotten. '' I think she deserves being more recognized In addition to world record she has won more than hundred ...'' you have used appropriate linking words. there is no irrelevant sentence in your paragraphs. moreover, your photos are reflecting your ideas and theme properly, so i like them. you have given details about her; i am approciated for this.
Thank you for your comment and suggestions :)
YanıtlaSil