When we shoot a glance , we can easily see that almost everybody checks their cell phones or laptops in order to sure whether they've got message, mail or notification from ,which is unavoidable fact in our globalising world. Thus , we're under control of the social media.Some sites like facebook, twitter , instagram , youtube etc. have high importance for people ;that's why, I wanted to mention about this topic.
Social media has powerful impacts on both people and society ;however , it has bad and good effects. Some bad sides are there : Social media invades our personal informations. Every second, thousands of people share their photos via the facebook , instagram and other sites but companies use these photos without permission.Not only companies do it but also some people use them for their profits. These sites creates huge sadness, loneliness, dissatisfaction because they block face-to face communication.People suppose that they are in good communication but one thing they do is socalled talking with technological devices. People are so addicted to social media that they put also their every strange and stupid photos on facebook , twitter, instagram , whatsup any more . They are not aware of seriousness of this situation but this doesn't welcome by a lot of people. Many employers are already rejecting job applicants for this reason.In order to decrease rates of addiction to social media we put some limits ourselves.Instead following lots of sites people use two or three of them.Other solution is instructive conferences can be given by psychologists and expert trainers to increase awareness of the importance of this situation. On the other hand , social media have lots of positive effects. Marketing via social media is at the top. In every sites there are lots of online shop store, which stimulate the some markets. People can make new friends around the world easily.If you are interested in some kind of music , play etc. you can find lots of groups or communities about them.If you are far away from your home , you have the chance to do video chat your family, friends. Moreover , much of what people need to know are available in there. To conclude , social media surrounds our lives and it is irreplaceable thing. Altough it causes some kind of bad habits or tiny psychological problems , it is important part of our life. What we need to is to be aware of its bad sides and be careful.
Dear Seda,
YanıtlaSilI think that you chose a very important topic today, because almost every other people have social media addiction. I really enjoyed your point of view about topic. I agree with you, because I think that we should not share everything about us on social media. I am like you against to social media and I have no account. Another thing I like your writing is your sentences are comprehensible and your writing is not too short or long. Ithink that you also explained your opinions about social media in a clear way. All in all, you are one of the few people who are aware of the negative effects of social media. I really appreciated it :)
Hi Seda,
YanıtlaSilI've just read your paragraph and I think you did very well on it. I certainly agree with your ideas. With the developing technology, social media has gained a great popularity but as you stated some people use it excessively. I liked your objective attitude towards the paragraph as you stated its good sides while criticising it. Eventually, It was fun to read :)