16 Ocak 2015 Cuma

Reflection Task 3





ANGELİNA JOLİE :THE PERSON OF THE YEAR


If I was a jury member of the committee choosing the person of the year , my chose would be Angelina Jolie. She is from Los Angeles,USA. She is actress. She is 39 years old.  Angelina has won three Golden Globes ,two Screen Actors Guild Award and Oscar.  The most important thing to be known about her is that she is goodwill ambassador of United Nations High Commission for Refugees (UNHCR). She played lots of cinema movie. Angelina's first film was Lookin'to Get Out where his father played also. She won an Academy Award for Best Supporting Actress with her great performance in İnterrupted (1999). In 2001 ,enabling great success with  Lara Croft: Tomb Raider she became world famous well-known actor. Then she became one of the most recognized and one of highest paid-player in Hollywood. Apart from her cinema actress, she made dubbling  and she got commercial gain. She has adopted three children from diffrent countries although she is mother of her biological children. Now I want to talk about her helpfulness. As I said above , she is known her charitable works. She went to diffrent war and poor region like Sierra Leone,Tanzania,Pakistan ,Chad,Thailand ,Afghanistan etc. to see the condition  and raise awareness. She visited refugee camps and made money donations lots of times. She supports 27 different charity with his partner 'Brad Pitt'.She values  human rights, children's rights, health, AIDS, poverty, post-disaster assistance, world peace, cancer, environment. Angelina Jolie is very helpful , compassionate ;that's why, she deserves to become yhe person of the year.





2 yorum:

  1. Dear Sedanur,
    I read your reflection task, and I liked it. I agree with you because I think Angelina Jolie can be the person of the year.You have mentioned Angelina's different qualifications which made him the person of the year. This is good for your reflection task.Apart from your topic chose,I also want to talk about your language use and organization.As for your language,you have used tenses correctly.However, there are some mistakes. In line 15, you have said 'to see condition.You should say conditions instead of condition.Also, you have forgotten some prepositions. In line 6 you should use in prepositions after played verb. You also forgot to use ' the' in line 10. you should use the before superlatives.As for your organization, I think your organization is very good. Firstly, you have introduced Angelina Jolie to us. Then, you have talked about her good characteristics.To sum up, I like your reflection task. I think it will be better after you rewrite it by considering your mistakes.

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  2. Thank you for your suggestions :)

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